Esos ojos (Relato) - Those eyes (Story)

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Este ejercicio de escritura creativa fue realizado con el tema: ojos marrones. mensaje diario de cinco minutos de freewriter del dia lunes 3 de enero
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Esos ojos

—¿Qué es lo que recuerda? — dijo el más pequeño, lo miró con cara de pocos amigos, siempre se pone así para meter miedo, tiene complejos por su tamaño, le había contado la chica.
—Te hice una pregunta y debes contestar.
—Bueno, la vi muy poco, estaba como en la nebulosa, me sentía como navegando en las nubes
—Muy gracioso, ¿crees que estoy jugando?
Lo empujó contra la pared y de su frente saltó un poco de sangre. Iba a continuar cuando su compañero le agarró el brazo.
—Así no sargento Díaz, es solo un sospechoso.
—¡Está bien! pero le hice una pregunta.
—Por qué no contestas, te hubieras evitado los problemas.
—Solo recuerdo sus ojos, veía muchas luces, pero allí estaban, mirándome; sí, ojos marrones, eran muy profundos; quería hundirme en esos iris ...
—¿Te las das de gracioso? —dijo el sargento.
—Me preguntó qué recordaba y eso le estoy diciendo.
—La chica desapareció y tú juegas con las palabras, fuiste el último que la vio, todos te vieron.
—Ya se los dije, recuerdo sus ojos marrones, estaba muy ebrio.
—Te lo dije, así no va hablar —dijo el sargento, — me lo vas decir ahora.
le dejó caer el puño con fuerza sobre el estómago.
—¡Aaaahhhhh! Le, le estoy diciendo la verdad, solo recuerdo sus ojos marrones, ella me miró de una manera diferente, nunca me habían mirado así, nadie lo ha hecho.
—¿Dónde la dejaste?
—Salimos a ese estacionamiento, era luna llena, inmensa y de luz muy brillante, cuando miré sus ojos, estos parecían crecer, me asusté y salí corriendo, me detuve un momento para verla, cuando di la vuelta, vi esos ojos que saltaban sobre mí, pero no era ella, era el cuerpo de un enorme lobo, caí de espalda, alguien abrió una puerta y solo me quedó el aullido perdiéndose en la noche, no sé qué pasó con la chica.
Los dos policías sonrieron y reventaron a carcajadas y luego aullaron mostrando sus colmillos; el hombre sintió que el miedo ya no le iba a salvar.

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Those eyes

-What do you remember? - said the smallest one, he looked at him with the face of a few friends, he always looks like that to scare people, he has complexes because of his size, the girl had told him.

-I asked you a question and you must answer.

-Well, I didn't see much of her, she was like in a haze, I felt like I was sailing in the clouds.

-Very funny, do you think I'm playing?

He pushed him against the wall and a little blood spurted from his forehead, he was about to continue when his partner grabbed his arm.

-Not like that, Sergeant Diaz, he's just a suspect.
-All right! But I asked him a question.
-Why don't you answer; you could have avoided the problems.

-I only remember his eyes, I could see a lot of lights, but there they were, looking at me, yes, brown eyes, they were very deep, I wanted to sink into those irises...

-You think you're funny? -said the sergeant.
-He asked me what I remembered and that's what I'm telling him.
-The girl disappeared and you play with words, you were the last one to see her, everyone saw you.
-I told you, I remember her brown eyes, I was very drunk.
-I told you, he won't talk like that," said the sergeant, "you're going to tell me now.
He dropped his fist hard on his stomach.

-Aaaahhhhh! Le, I'm telling her the truth, I just remember her brown eyes, she looked at me in a different way, I've never been looked at like that, no one has.

-Where did you leave her?
-We went out to that car park, it was a full moon, huge and with a very bright light, when I looked at her eyes, they seemed to grow, I got scared and ran out, I stopped for a moment to see her, when I turned around, I saw those eyes jumping at me, but it wasn't her, it was the body of a huge wolf, I fell backward, someone opened a door and I only had the howl getting lost in the night, I don't know what happened to the girl.

The two policemen smiled and burst out laughing and then howled showing their fangs, the man felt that fear was no longer going to save him.
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