Aeroplane Jelly For Me, a Freewrite

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"The heartbreak of psoriasis."

"Shut up Carl" I'd had enough of his soundbite responses to my agony. They always made me feel like he was making fun of me. I scratched the dry patch on the tender underside of my wrist until it bled.

"Red in tooth and claw" he said.

This was something new, not his usual TV commercial variety remark.

As I stood to put a pot of oatmeal on, tiny flakes of bloodied skin fell onto my lap. I felt disgusted by my own body, and worried I would finally disgust him enough to leave me.

Carl said nothing. I'd been with this man for forty years, and knew he was at his most unpredictable when he was silent. Then he stood, walked over to me, and closed me in his arms.

"It's better to have loved and lost, than never to have loved at all."

Tennyson.

My knees turned to jelly.

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This is my entry to mariannewest@mariannewest's daily freewrite challenge. Today's prompt is heartbreak. I was channeling carolkean@carolkean with this one, video and all.

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