Interesting story. Mr. Charles believed what Pa Ayayi told him and that made him confess, he thought he was going to die if he did not. I think Pa Ayayi was very cunning. I liked it very much it was surprising the ending.
I don't know what a fetish means in your story ? Could you explain it to me?
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RE: The Dutiful Security Officer (The Ink Well Prompt #85)