I saw that when I checked a bit about your posts. I like your writing and your characters are interesting.

You "almost" succeeded in telling the story in this one write up, but I had to tell you what had to be told. The subtle remarks didn't do enough justice to clarify some aspects in the story in my opinion, and I think you can see what I mean.

But other than that, yeah would love to read more of your stories in The Ink Well man. Keep them coming!