Betrayal πŸ’”|| Poem Analysis 4

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Doing this every week has really gotten me pumped πŸ˜€

I dub today #poemanalysiswednesday πŸ˜€ also known as #paw

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For the Eastern folk, this is a rather peculiar day, the day of Jesus's betrayal, Holy Wednesday
Well in commemoration of that, I had to talk about a poem that talks about betrayal, a poem by a rather renowned hiver, our very own kemmyb@kemmyb
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Betrayal


The pain of betrayal


No eloquence can put it in words

Like a thousand knives

Striking every inch of the soul

Anger and shame,

Of trust given and shattered

Tears the soul apart in regret

Alone and lost,

Like the crashing waves

Hot tears flow from a river of pain

Broken promises


Sweet whispered lies

Endearing deceit

Chafing at trust

Little by little, the cracks appear

Tearing down the walls

Vulnerable and alone, my soul weeps

For trusting you

Can this wound heal?

Can this ache fade away?

Daily, I mourn the loss

Betrayal, a wound so deep


I count my tears in solitude

Unforgivable, my heart says

But a glint of hope

Longs for yesterday's memories

Choose tomorrow, it beckons

For a new beginning awaits.


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My Analysis

kemmyb@kemmyb tells the story of a person trying to heal from a betrayal.
Using eloquent wordplay, she describes the intense pain this person went through having his trust given thrown back to him.
The person wonders of the pain ever goes away, ever mourning the loss of trust once had.
Although the person has a new perspective, hoping for tomorrow as nothing can be done about the past.
Although you do remember the fun times before the betrayal, you look forward as future friendships awaits ✨


A beautiful poem to describe the pain felt on betrayal.
Probably the same pain Jesus felt on today many years ago.
A lovely poem for Holy Wednesday, if I do say so myself πŸ˜€

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Thanks for joining me in another episode of my poem analysisπŸ˜€
Share what you think in my comments, and make sure to check out and comment kemmyb@kemmyb's poem in the actual post

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