I can see you've thought this through and understand your own and your husband's needs. Show him what you wrote me - maybe he'll understand :)

Interesting...don't know if you've read e e cummings but here's what he says: A poet is somebody who feels, and who expresses his feelings through words. This may sound easy. It isn't. A lot of people

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Don't know what to make of this - why the stats? Is this your work, your creative imagination? I don't mean to be mean but I have to ask because of Chat GPT and frankly, to the unknowing reader such as

An interesting take on the Pythagorean theory of the Music of the Spheres. In a perfect universe the harmony of the planets in motion would provide beautiful music, as it is, it simply provides beautiful

Not sure if you're at the end of the lane or the end of your patience, lol. When my wife was out west helping out my son I busied myself around the house as you are doing. It's the best therapy really,

Is it a case of being happy where you are, or being happy with who you're with? You have each other and a life ahead of you - sometimes you have to compromise. When two people have each other, it doesn't

Ah yes, the bane of good writers - finding readers capable of responding to and appreciating the merits of good work. I've only read two of your posts but I can see themes in your work and a fascination

This was a unique concept - in a way it explores the duality all artists struggle with, integrating the various aspects of the fragmented psyche. As Jung described it, we all have a shadow self and there

This was an inspiring tale of ambition and determination. Unfortunately, that in itself is not a guarantee of success - Take for example this post - it's well-written, significant and uplifting yet you

You had a good concept for this story but unfortunately stylistic errors weakened the narration. When an author's handling of a story distracts form the narrative, that's a problem. Specifically, you need

You have a creative idea here and it functions as a very short story but I wonder if you could go back and expand it into a deeper tale? The ancients believed a thing could be perfect whatever its dimensions

Thanks @morey-lezama for the articulate and perceptive comments. Every writer desires a perceptive reader and frankly, I'm surprised to get any kind of response on here, especially such a well-thought

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Your experience of recovering the scent of the sea is really about rediscovering past experiences that persist in memory and are often elicited by sensory experiences that stimulate remembering. The same

Not sure if you'll see this comment bc you posted this piece 4 days ago but I'll try. It was a sweet story, nicely written. Picking up on what theinkwell commented, you may want to try writing solely in

Unfortunately, Catholic schools aren't always welcoming. I was really grieved t hear about your experience because I taught in Catholic schools and would always reach out to students who appeared to be

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