This was a unique concept - in a way it explores the duality all artists struggle with, integrating the various aspects of the fragmented psyche. As Jung described it, we all have a shadow self and there is a glimmer here of what could be explored in a longer genre such as a novella or novel. I like the art work you chose to depict the whirling shards of Tamar's thought traces, now mere vestiges of a vibrant counterpart. You write well and have taken care to polish this finished product - that care in workmanship I admire. Nicely done.