No I think I like the challenge of having to write about something outside of that zone you are correct about what you say I want to become a published well-respected in world-renowned author so in order to do so I have to be able to take these kinds of criticism. I have to learn to roll with the punches so to speak. I may even check out those writing prompts, find something a little more suiting but I will still most likely add a little action to it I will stray away from it being extreme violence. A gunfight here or there or what not as long as it isn't too explicit I believe I'll be able to get away with it. I will watch it very closely because my goal is to write and draw my own comic at some point but I also want the comic to be aimed between young adults and adults so I think this is good for me, thank you.
RE: Volition: slaughter house.