This piece has an urgency to it, it races along at a perfectly paced speed towards the inevitable conclusion. You structure the scene well- giving us clues that justify the protagonist’s mind set. We “see” her attempting to explain the inequitable situation to herself and we are privy to her epiphany moment. Nicely done.
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