Jasmine has a challenging life and unfair existence, kind of like Cinderella. Your story has a nice "arc" and resolution, when she witnesses the jewelry thieves burying the loot and is able to get her wish by reporting this to the king.
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RE: Midnight Girl - (The Inkwell Prompt #87)