RE: Whinny||The Inkwell Writing Prompt

This is a lovely story, @dwixer. Brianna and the cat both needed someone to love. It was a nice coincidence, the dress with the name "Whinny" on it.

There was a little confusion in the story about whether the person Brianna is calling on the phone is her son or grandson (he calls her Grandma but in the beginning the narrator states that she calls her son). This is a minor issue and you can easily fix it through editing.

There was good psychological insight in the story. When we are lonely, everything looks drab and loses its flavor. When we are happy the world is covered in brighter colors.

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