Quite a suspenseful one!
I was gripped from the very moment we saw Caleb trying to walk out of the ice to his parents. For me, I don't think it's a really good idea to visit such a precarious place like a winter home situated next to a frozen lake with a six-year old. And even if that happens, one must never let such a child out of sight.
Anyway, I'm glad that this didn't turn out to be a tragic.
You've come up with yet another beautifully and expertly written piece. Well done, Bruno!
RE: The Icy Stretch