Why thank you! I was going for adventurous and something much more different.

Ah yes, I know how confusing a story within a story can be but I did it anyway!

it seems the whole narrative is almost lost in the shadows.

Lol, not my intention but I shall take this as a fine compliment and addition to the story:)

True, indeed, traditional prosing would've been a lot easier to read but then again, it matters what story you are referring to: The one within the story, or the whole thing in general? XD

_{Either way, I appreciate the pointers}