Why thank you, I wrote it in the toilet. Probably why it looks like cheese shit now that I'm reading it all over again.

_{Either that or... It's just that second time cringiness thing every writer gets when they review their work}

LoL, he does give that low-key simper vibe huh? Exactly what I was going for!

She's certainly a mystery, drawing him into her flame without hardly doing anything at all! I felt more sorry for him than her

Ha! I know right! My man just wanted to get lucky 😂