Paradise / An Original Poem

Tri-o-let: a poem of eight lines, typically of eight syllables each, rhyming abaaabab and so structured that the first line recurs as the fourth and seventh and the second as the eighth.

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• Hey folks, so this was my first attempt at a tri-o-let, a fun little form I had found by way of @moeknows who recently posted one. I had a lot of fun doing it, bit of a struggle though seeing as I had made it while forgetting about the 8 syllables per line.

@carmalain7 was a big help, aiding me in tearing apart the original and reforming it into the correct form!

~Themadrunnah
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