Hello @zeraton,
This is a real head-scratcher of a story. You get super extra points for breaking the mold...every mold. And you get extra-super-extra points for zany fun. As for clarity. Well, one has to try to get into the POV of an irritating amoeba and its computer. One has to be willing to listen to an annoying youtube video that obviously has references to the "Spongehead World". So, while the story is certainly not boring, it takes a little refocusing to follow the action (such as it is).
You have apparently written this in response to the prompt, so it should be linked as a comment under the prompt post. That's where we review the prompt stories when compiling lists and prizes for the week.
Thanks for offering this definitely unconventional story to the Inkwell community. One of the quality we stress when describing stories we welcome, is originality. A++ on that count. We really appreciate that you comment on the stories of other writers in the community.
By all means, keep writing, and keep surprising.
RE: Rats! Foiled once again!