@mother.dragons11, please read our community rules. This story is not appropriate for The Ink Well for the following reasons:

1. It's not a story. (A vignette, perhaps.)
2. It's too short. We advise writers to produce stories of at least 750 words.
3. We ask our writers not to produce content that is focused on violence.
4. Additionally, you have not engaged in our community by reading or commenting on other writers' work, which is one of our requirements.

Note also that before we curate writers in our community, we need to see an introductory post on your blog.

Check out our treasure trove of tips, reminders and guidelines, and the community rules posted at the top of our community home page. Those resources will provide everything you need to know to follow our guidelines and to be successful in The Ink Well.

Thank you.