That's a funny story. We feel sorry for the young chap, even as we laugh. He really wanted that lemonade, and he paid a lot for it. Good descriptive language in here. There is an issue of starting and ending sentence (always end with a period and begin the next sentence with a capital letter), but the story reads well.

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