This is a beautiful story, @ipexito. Your opening paragraph is stunning. It draws us in and makes us want to keep reading. And the details are exquisite.

Here's a tip for you. Consider adding conflict to your stories. Conflict is an essential element of a good story. It provides the friction needed to make the reader want to find out how everything will turn out. The resolution of the conflict creates the "story arc." See the linked resources in our catalog of fiction writing tips for more information on these concepts.

For example, what if giant storm clouds appeared in the middle of the ceremony and lightning began to strike off in the distance? The reader would fret that everything would be ruined if the storm clouds produced torrential rain. But perhaps a breeze would blow through and eventually the clouds would move off and the sky would clear again just in time for the minister to pronounce them husband and wife. Just an idea! (And then your story would be perfect for this month's fiction contest in The Ink Well, in which the writing prompt is "storm."!)

Finally, we just have to ask: Are you really married to @arduilcelebren? 😀