That was definitely a game-changing three minutes, @fantom22. It's no wonder that you will always remember it!

We'd like to commend the quality of your writing in this post. You shared a very interesting experience, explained the drama of it very well with action and dialogue in addition to narrative. Nicely done! (Just remember: in The Ink Well, we advise against adding morals or lessons to your stories. You will see a note about that in the reminders section of our monthly newsletter. See the section titled "Important Reminders to all Writers in The Ink Well.")