RE: RE: Burden of conscience
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RE: Burden of conscience

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This is a wonderful story, fantom22@fantom22. The best part may be the ending, in which the couple does not get married and live happily ever after (although, of course they might). They take walks together in the park. This is a less expected and more more realistic (therefore satisfying) resolution.

You take care of two conflicts in this story: the man would like to find a lady to walk with, and the man does not know what to do with the purse. Great resolutions to the conflicts on both counts.

Thank you for sharing this story with us, fantom22@fantom22. We appreciate that you engage with other authors in the community.