It ended up being a very nice morning, didn't it? You start with the theme of cold. Becky is cold. She doesn't want to rouse herself. Perhaps Julius brought the cold? Then her mother comes. Becky is not sure she likes that either. But in the end, there is warmth in the apartment, as three people who care about each other begin to go about the day.

It is clear that you see this scene in your head as you write. Your descriptions are vivid. That's great. Do you intend to use this as a response to the prompt post? It fits. If you want to, you can link the story there and more people might read it.

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