Hello @adese,

You certainly do get our attention when you use the wrong toothbrush. That's something we can all relate to. Forgetting your money, having the wrong laptop--all nice touches. The story would read better if you ran this through an editor that could check for minor grammar errors. Grammarly is a good program. However, when you do this, please do not let the program rephrase your work or make style suggestion. We only allow grammatical corrections by bots.

The piece was fun to read. We hope our suggestion helps you to develop your writing skills even further.