You have a creative idea here and it functions as a very short story but I wonder if you could go back and expand it into a deeper tale? The ancients believed a thing could be perfect whatever its dimensions

Thanks @morey-lezama for the articulate and perceptive comments. Every writer desires a perceptive reader and frankly, I'm surprised to get any kind of response on here, especially such a well-thought

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Your experience of recovering the scent of the sea is really about rediscovering past experiences that persist in memory and are often elicited by sensory experiences that stimulate remembering. The same

Not sure if you'll see this comment bc you posted this piece 4 days ago but I'll try. It was a sweet story, nicely written. Picking up on what theinkwell commented, you may want to try writing solely in

Unfortunately, Catholic schools aren't always welcoming. I was really grieved t hear about your experience because I taught in Catholic schools and would always reach out to students who appeared to be

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Thank you @lanzjoseg for liking and retweeting the story :)

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Ha ha, only in Canada :)

Thanks! Not too bad in around the GTA - spitting rain a bit now, but I'm still taking my dog for a walk :). Good to hear from you, @offgridlife

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Thanks for your thoughtful response, Barb. Yes those Victorian houses are pretty but those tall, narrow windows harbour secrets :)