What an interesting and well-told story, @rinconpoetico7. So often when we see stories about kingdoms and royalty, it seems as though we have read them before. But this one was quite unique. I really liked how Hamulet was involved in the matters of state and worked right alongside her husband.

I have a few tips for you on this story. The first one is about the character description of Hamulet. When she first enters the scene, there is nothing to describe her, or how she has managed to be a warrior in a time when these jobs are mostly the work of men. And so, I was not able to determine whether Hamulet was a woman or a man. I did not figure it out until Askar referred to her as his wife. I almost fell out of my chair! The whole time I thought she was a man. (This was partly due to the similarity to the name Hamlet, from Shakespeare.) You might want to provide a hint earlier in the story that Hamulet is a woman.

The second tip is about pronouns. Overall, you use the right pronouns throughout the story. I know this is a challenge when translating from Spanish to English. I did find one instance, where Hamulet is referred to as a male:

Hamulet closed his eyes, and small tears welled up. "This is over. We must escape to fight another day."

If you changed the instance of "his" to "her" it would be correct. I hope this is helpful!