I've read this thread. Thank you for being open to the feedback and to editing your story, @rakushasu.
This is challenging for us at The Ink Well, because at least two to four stories each week involve the accosting and or killing of women. We're not sure why these themes are so popular. It's the very reason the latest story prompt is 50 stories ideas. Please read that post, @rakushasu.
While we sometimes have to mute these stories, we are not muting yours because the story does not graphically portray the violence or glorify it in any way.
From your comments I know you get it. Thank you. You're a very good writer. Looking forward to seeing more of your work.
RE: Night Shift on the Cleaning Job