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4y
I felt so bad for Jane. So many people treated her badly, and even her teacher was threatening punishment. Nice work building tension in the story. That creates the "story arc" we often talk about. Good resolution too!
I felt so bad for Jane. So many people treated her badly, and even her teacher was threatening punishment. Nice work building tension in the story. That creates the "story arc" we often talk about. Good resolution too!
RE: The ink well prompt 70/ Embarrassment