RE: RE: Mary finally fishes
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RE: Mary finally fishes

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Lovely story, gabmr@gabmr. I really enjoyed the dynamic between the two characters, and your amusing turns of phrase. I found myself smiling at the observations and interactions of the two characters. And you did a great job of building suspense and then resolving all of the tension in the end.