Hello, @theinkwell

Yes, you are right. To have included the dialogues to elaborate on the conflict, and something more about its background and underlying causes, could have given more depth to the present narrative exercise. I am aware. By the way, the article you suggested, which I have already read, is excellent and useful for both novices and advanced writers. However, I wanted to exploit the use of the omniscient narrator, one capable of arousing empathy with the characters. Of course, the first-person narrator would have been appropriate, but that's what literature is all about, forcing the forms to search for expression variants.

I really enjoyed writing "Anticipated Breakage" and taking the story's background from Spanish to English beyond the simple use of translation tools.

Thank you very much for giving elements to energize this fantastic community.