RE: RE: Trapped in the Museum / A Dream Come True with an Unexpected Ending
You are viewing a single comment's thread from:

RE: Trapped in the Museum / A Dream Come True with an Unexpected Ending

gabmr(67)
Published in
The Ink Well
Words
35
Reading
1 min
Listen
Play
24d

Felt like a nightmare. All details got me on my nerves. I think you developed a nice climax, but it could even be better if you worked the end of it a little bit more.

ecency
via hiveblog
This post was published via hiveblog. Ecency is not the originator or editor of this content and displays it for discovery purposes only.
2