@theinkwellThank you very much for reading my story so closely and commenting on it so extensively, as well as you liking my story. I have corrected the last 3 paragraphs and put the link to the story on the prompt post. Actually, I had completed this story in the afternoon itself, then slept after scheduling it for 10 o'clock in the night, just got up to see whether the story was published or not, so did not even think of linking.
And before I thought to link that I got your important comment. Thank you so much for supporting and encouraging me.