Well, my thoughts are eroded obviously. Was I even anywhere near anything that the poem was about or were both of my guesses so far off they don't even make sense once the secret is revealed?

Having something such as a sad experience in common isn't such a bad thing it gives us a bond. We can play off of that and maybe do a duo piece together. I tend to have outbursts too, I just twist my words

A little fishy, my mind went somewhere with that ;) I agree, that chick is hot. I am glad you enjoyed my vamp poem.

I took the teeth bit out of a free write I did last week and wrote the rest around it. It was a fun write. I'm glad you enjoyed it.

@indiaunited I just hit ya with 150

I understand the desire for human connection. People don't understand how I'm so comfortable living at the homeless shelter. I'm in a 9-month program with a small group I've grown very close to. I haven't

@hive-161465 I hit ya for another 50 brother

I can't tell if this is about a spider in the garden or a patient getting their heart restarted but either way, beautifully written.

You use your heart as I do. I have a sad one floating around too. It's easy to spot when it's pain-filled and raw as this was. Great job. I look forward to more. Cheers ErodedThoughts

My son. He was stillborn. My wife passed him at home and I got to hold him as we waited on the ambulance. It was the saddest thing I've ever had to do but I'm glad I did as at least I got a minute. He

Love. The strong topic around here by me, you and others. It really sucks when love is one-sided and love is not returned. Your last line makes me wonder if this piece of work is fact or fiction. Sounds

Rain is also so beautiful and fun to play in as well. Have a hole big enough and it fills with water you can hold some baptisms. If that's your thing.

Things that finally come after a long wait are sometimes the best things to get. They can often make you delirious with joy. Glad you lucked out and got what you wanted.

@hive-161465 It's about my pap, not my dad. My grandfather was taken from me at 14 when I was a snot nose little punk who was too much of a dumbass to embrace the love he tried to give. I'd give anything

You are VERY welcome, thanks for spending time with me and chatting.

Rain is the elixir of life on the planet. Add the sun and the trees and you have the perfect ecosystem. Yet there'd be no tree, no life at all without rain. Interesting topic for a poem. Well done writing

True love, is hard to fight. There is little you can do but love. Doesn't really matter what the other one does as long as it's true love the other will always be there. Nicely written.

Therapy maybe? That line cracked me up. It's not always about winning but when you're not used to it, it does feel good to pull one out. This was a very interesting poem. Couldn't tell if it was about

That's just where my mind went as I read those words. Those 4 lines caught me hook, line and sinker

Me, I swell like a balloon, And drift into space. I’m running outta air here, Look down & don’t see you Left unsatisfied? Am I reading that wrong? If not, I know that feeling and hate it with a passion