Marky Sue sounds incredibly naive for a scientist and a scholar.

Indeed, I am naive in fictional writing.

I don't believe these titles are earned nor are they reflected in the character's motives or actions.

I choice Marky as here name not a title.

Making a longer story is a noble goal but you have to be careful to make additions meaningful.

This time, my goal was to write my best without thinking about the length. I am sorry if you found some additions useless.

you gave your protagonist infinite plot armour and no real challenge whatsoever.

In next entry, I will try to add a conflict. I was just to nervous about the non violence fiction rule that it bounded my self to add any plot.

Your entire story is padding.

The meaning I got from google: "the practice of adding needless or repetitive information to sentences and paragraphs--often for the purpose of meeting a minimum word count".

If it was to fulfill minimum word count then I already achieved that mark but still wished to write more as my target was to be used to the concept of longer posts. If it means something else let me know.

I wish you would extend the same grace offered to you instead of hastily downvoting people.

I don't downvote people without a reason. I follow downvote trial of steemflagrewards. I manually downvote abusers and report cases of abuse to relevant people on discord of those I can't handle the downvotes. Since u called it hastily downvoting, my discord is DLMMQB#6953. Maybe if we talk, I can assure you how much work I have done to protect the reward pool till today related to botnets, curators, art, alts etc(there is a chance, you might not call it hostile downvoting then). I assume someone might have told you something else about me?

Good luck with your journey and honing your writing skills.

Thanks for wishing me luck. Your very thoughtful comment is important for me to honing(just learned a new word by google it) my skills indeed.

I really appreciate your comment.