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Marky Sue sounds incredibly naive for a scientist and a scholar. I don't believe these titles are earned nor are they reflected in the character's motives or actions. Making a longer story is a noble goal but you have to be careful to make additions meaningful. There was no conflicts in the story because you gave your protagonist infinite plot armour and no real challenge whatsoever. Your entire story is padding.
https://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/Padding
Your stake is yours to do with as you please but just like you are learning to do better, I wish you would extend the same grace offered to you instead of hastily downvoting people. Good luck with your journey and honing your writing skills.
RE: THE EYE WHICH SEES ALL! Prompt #55 "LENS"!