RE: RE: Just Talking
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RE: Just Talking

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Thank you for giving my story a part of your precious time. I totally agree that I have omitted several important details that should have helped make the story clearer. It has been a total challenge for me since this is just my first time writing flash fiction and I was overthinking if stories about mental health would be welcome.

I thought I wrote it in a way that Vee's conflict is resolved (whether she should continue listening to Kent or finally give herself the time to process what she's going through by going to therapy). However, from the comments, I realized that part wasn't effective enough.

I will apply your tip and try to edit this story in the future. Again, thank you so much. This means a lot to me.

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