RE: RE: We Had to Make a Few Changes for Grandma's Funeral, Necessary Changes
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RE: We Had to Make a Few Changes for Grandma's Funeral, Necessary Changes

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This is sooo well written! I'm impressed! Just the right amount of detail to make it feel authentic. And that horrific surprise at the end. I think they'd better go back to that idea of fire.... if it would even help.

Well done!

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