Hi, @josemalavem,
My first comment. Very exciting!
I value your critique highly. Thank you. When I first visualized this character, she was not complex. She was vain and selfish. But then, in writing the story things evolved. Flawed people can be sympathetic. We are all flawed. It's great that you see the subtlety I tried to insert into this character.
I appreciate the endorsement of @celfmagazine greatly.
My VP is anemic in both accounts right now, so will upvote you when the vote will have some value.
Greetings, and health to you and your family.
AG