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I think your story is well conceived and told, @agmoore. The fundamentally psychological-affective conflict is effectively presented. The main character is characterized in a precise way and, at the same time, with certain ambiguity; which makes it more attractive. In addition, the open ending gives the story greater quality. Good luck and greetings!
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