Thank you for working on this story again, @ubani1. I'll confess to you that my 'editor' is my husband. Before I publish anything, I let him read it and usually he has good advice for me. I try to take that advice, although sometimes I don't want to change my story :)

You did a good job here on so many levels. You focused on each scene so the reader could see it. You didn't cut corners, but led us through the different steps so that we understand Scully's anger.

I enjoyed reading the story.

Hope to see you write a story for this week's prompt. With your imagination, that story should be great.