You did a good a job in this story, @marriot5464. I wanted the character to get away, but this was a more believable ending. All of it was convincing. However, I would suggest that you could have come up with a less familiar impetus for the crime. Needing money for a surgery...this story deserved a better motivation. It's good enough to have a more original motivation. I don't know what, but something more distinct. This is not a criticism of your story. It's a suggestion :P

I liked the story.