I’m a big fan of dystopian stories like these, Orwellian states and all that! I really enjoyed the way you set this one up and how we learn little by little how Paradise works along with Malcolm, feels like I’m right there with him figuring all this out
Looking forward to reading more of his adventures
FYI I picked your post as my @pifc nomination of the week! You can find the nomination post on my blog! You can also check out the pifc account for more posts we’ve found by cool authors like yourself and you can join us in nominating authors you’ve found each week and share their stories and we’d be happy to support them
RE: "A Pleasant Day in Paradise" - Original Short Fiction