RE: RE: The Homeless Old Woman
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RE: The Homeless Old Woman

RE: The Homeless Old Woman

I like the happy ending/twist, but wouldn't the old woman be looking for her daughter instead of begging? Also, wouldn't the daughter express a more extreme feeling of relief at finding her mother?

Otherwise, good writing! The flow was good, but the end has a few plot holes!

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