Wow. Thank you so much for this thorough feedback!! It was great having the opportunity again to let some Splinterlands creativity flow, the writing contest seems ages ago!

A storm of small arrows was loosed by the Brownies, who had assembled in full ranks at the forest's edge. Earth Elementals flung bough, limb and branch toward the attackers while the Forest Spirits worked together to generate a powerful psychic barrier. A force of Mitica Headhunters charged from the forest with silver spears aglow in the reflection of lightning flashes.

And that's why you're the Loremaster! :) Perfect description! I struggle a little bit with more descriptive scenes, since english is not my native language and in normal day life most of the english I read is technical one. Nevertheless, the constructive criticism will help me for sure in improving my writing on the next lore atempt. Thank you again, and cheers! !BEER