The story so far (in order):
@dibblers.dabs/a-tale-of-two-pizzas-ongoing-contest
@wrestlingdesires/the-great-pizza-feast
@dibblers.dabs/a-tale-of-two-pizzas-ongoing-contest-week-2
Side storyline:
@jesustiano/el-adviento-de-la-pizza
Once again the entries this week were fantastic! You certainly aren't making it easy to pick a single winner! There were four entries this week so we doubled down! With any luck this contest will continue to see some growth and keep expanding the universe of our beloved Pizza Baron, Danny Rupert.
Check out this weeks entries here :
@wrestlingdesires
@wrestlingdesires/the-rise-of-the-predas-a-tale-of-two-pizzas
Wrestlingdesires once again wrote a strong piece expanding the characters of Mr and Mrs Preda, the Oil Baron and Baroness!
@dadspardan
@dadspardan/a-tale-of-two-pizzas-the-crust-thickens
Dadspardan came in with a piece that made me laugh out loud and had some cheeky references to gamer culture.
@jesustiano
@jesustiano/la-bendita-pizza-esp-or
Jesustiano continued to expand the story of young Frankches, an assistant of Chef Charlie, and introduced us to the idea of a pizza religion! Blessed Neapolitan!
@onewolfe
@onewolfe/a-tale-of-two-pizzas-contest-entry
Onewolfe snuck in with a last minute entry, showing us that perhaps Chef Charlie wont have it quite so bad after all!
As the contest continues to grow and we get more entries it will become more and more important that we are able to maintain continuity and flow- the idea is after all to open source a novella by gamifying the writing process! Two entries really stood out this week and built upon our story- they even work well together and can be read back to back without losing the flow.
Due to this I am awarding 15 $PIZZA and 5 SBI each to @onewolfe and @wrestlingdesires! In terms of the order they should be read in for the story:
@wrestlingdesires/the-rise-of-the-predas-a-tale-of-two-pizzas
@onewolfe/a-tale-of-two-pizzas-contest-entry
@jesustiano your entry and continuation of Frankches storyline keeps me intrigued and I am very interested in where it is going, but the thread is lost a little- it feels like a substantial amount of time has passed since the feast of 10000 Pizzas.
@dadspardan your entry truly made me laugh out loud. I giggled like a 2 year old at the mario reference! I also appreciate the effort you put in to giving us some more descriptive sections about the Baron's house, I felt you getting into his post apocalyptic vibe! It doesn't quite keep the thread of the story though!
I also want to thank all four of you for writing and helping us get this contest off the ground so I'm going to send all 4 of you an additional 5 $PIZZA
As the contest continues it will become more and more important to have continuity between each segment that is written so that we have a smooth timeline and we aren't writing conflicting pieces!
Congratulations to you all! I hope to see more entries from all of you next week!
I will get to work on continuing our tale and post the next section of the story and the new round of the contest shortly- as soon as I have written it anyway!