This was a gripping and intense story! The suspense and eerie atmosphere you created with Mr. Eke's dual identity and the mysterious cameras were really well done. Kelechi's fear and determination to escape were palpable, and I found myself rooting for him the whole way through.
The twist with the landlord being much older and the moon sacrifice was unexpected, and you handled the supernatural elements smoothly, making it feel chilling without going overboard. The scene where Kelechi squeezes himself through the window was especially tense—I could really picture his desperation to get away.
Overall, great work with keeping the reader engaged from start to finish. Looking forward to more stories like this!
RE: Young Landlord