Creative Writing Challenge Vol. 2: Your latest entries & Something More. "The house of the front"

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"The house of the front"

It was Aug 1, 7.35 a.m.

Susan tried the sugarless coffee and stared from the window of her house at Shirley, Long Island. She had a day off and her plan was cleaning the house. Suddenly, a loud sound came from the neighbors house. A sound that she has never heard in this town. A bit scared she turned her head at the opposite side of the room and ran to the window with view to the neighborhood house where the sound came from, but noticed that nothing strange happened, after a while the strange noise ceased, she remained with the curiosity and without giving more importance she continued doing their housework.

Most of the people in that neighborhood knew that those who lived in that house were a little strange people, independent and of very little treatment that did not cause any type of annoyance to anybody, reason why they go by unnoticed. The normal days passed and the noise was again heard again, Susan was frightened and ran immediately to the window to observe, this time the noise was louder and wanted to know where it came from, the woman's curiosity was increasing; When he looked in the distance at the figure of a man staggering back and forth inside the house of his strange neighbors, she retired from the window very thoughtful, but immediately looked back, she taking care of not being discovered for the situation so strange that had observed.

When Susan looked back, he noticed that he neighbor left the house very quiet as if nothing, but she was looking very intrigued. While that strange man got into his car with his partner and they were about to leave he noticed that Susan spied them in the distance from the window, he the her gave her a smile and left. The truth is that Susan seemed increasingly strange the attitude of those neighbors who constantly received visits late at night, she at first innocent thought that it was only a liberal couple who came and went the house but soon noticed that it was also very strange that people that entered did not come out again and the noise that heard kept awake their great curiosity who could more than his fear.

Susan with a little fear and curiosity at once decided to investigate, so very brave left her house to cross the narrow street that divided them, entered the back where the beautiful garden was, there found a wooden door that overlooked direction to the kitchen where managed for get in with great care; when he looked around while inside the house he realized that it was a very cozy place with nice furniture and a few pictures hanging on the wall. Although it seemed cozy the place felt a very particular smell, she tried quickly and locate where it came from, did not know how long it would take the neighbor to get to the house and had to act soon. That penetrating smell seemed to be rusty, but it was strange because the house was impeccable; Curiosity grew and her heart beat louder, she was scared but she still decided to look around the house.

As Susan walked through the house she realized that under the stairs there was a small door that led to a basement, tried to open, but at the same time it heard a noise from the bottom and approached the door be able to hear better but it was impossible, the only thing I felt that smell became more penetrating very similar to ammonia mixed with alcohol; Susan felt she had to leave the place to get help, but the moment she was about to leave the place, she felt the sound of a vehicle coming, the nerve woman hurried away without leaving a trace, while the neighbors came through the front door she went out the back of the house, as she managed to sneak out to, but the neighbor noticed the curious was Susan who constantly looked at his house.

With all the atmosphere of suspense that was breathed around the brave girl thought her heart would explode with fright, but she had a lot of obsession to want to know what those people hid, the next day, while the neighbors came out she was waiting with his cup of coffee and looked out her window as usual, noticed that people came and went again to the house carrying in their hands suitcases and boxes; In the meantime, Susan I observe that people looked like doctors; the truth is that long ago before they moved to the neighborhood was rumored that they were couple of renowned surgeon who from one moment to another stopped practicing your profession.

Susan's curiosity was so intense that she was constantly thinking of going back to that house; the strange noises were more frequent you could hear blows and noises of sierras; when night came Susan saw that the neighbor's vehicle was not in her garage, which meant that the house was alone; decided to return once more, she found a flashlight, dressed in dark clothes to hide between the night, went to the house of the strangers without anyone to see and without any suspicion, ready to know what was behind everything, so this time he managed to enter through the window and felt that the same smell remained inside the house, the atmosphere was cold, he had the feeling that something was not right. Susan was experiencing a kind of premonition, but she did not know.

Even though she was afraid, continued to walk, carefully opened the door leading to the basement and bravely set out to go down, the place was very dark. she looked for the light switch, touched the walls but did not find it, made a bad footfall and slipped down to the bottom of the basement, striking his head hard, began to bleed from the wound of that fall; between pain and confusion, she opened her eyes and in the dim light she was able to visualize many glass jars with strange contents, she could only distinguish a kind of rudimentary operating table. On the floor was a disorder and the smell was unbearable, he see the scene and horrified she, very scared she and with many nerves does not perceive someone was behind, felt hands holded her tightly covering face with a cloth, in deep I breath, for fear tried scream, but ended unconscious.

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"A strong light woke me up I do not remember how long I remained unconscious, I tried to move but I she was tied on a table, the cold of metal ran all over my body, I could not move or scream, behind me came people dressed in doctors, with surgical gowns I never managed to distinguish their faces.From the side I saw a table with surgical instruments and I watched several cam that focused on me as if it were a movie, the last thing I heard was: - "Susan had to go back again true ?, those words they froze all my blood I and then listen: - "Doctor, all ready for the extraction of the organ!" proceed with the first incision! "

"Get to your house the soonest, do not look through the windows, close the doors with insurance and turn on all the lights so that the darkness does not penetrate in any corner."

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Image source:
https://peru.com/mujeres/sexo-y-romance/entendi-que-perdia-mi-tiempo-quien-no-sabia-que-queria-noticia-408267
http://www.huffingtonpost.es/2013/11/29/neurocientifico-psicopata_n_4358955.html

this is my task for the Creative Writing Challenge: (vol. 2, task # 10), organized by:
@steemfluencer

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