RE: RE: The Good Girl
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RE: The Good Girl

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As I live and breathe...

It seems as though you have an affinity for breaking community rules every now and then River. I dig it! Turns out you're not such a "Good" girl after all :)

Laughs in Goblin Voice

Aside from the obvious gore which I actually enjoyed(although they didn't seem to think so👀), this was an incredible and very thought provoking story.

Ouu... I had no idea you wrote fiction. This is my first time reading one of your pieces. It's usually plants, and herbs, and the earth with ya lol. But I enjoyed this.


Hmm, it's not often you come across a story with such a distressed, disabled, and ominous character like yours. I see, she must've suffered so much from her own demons so much so, that it has deceived her subconscious mind to believe that she is "Good".

We the readers all saw what was wrong there, but I don't think SHE did. Hmm, or maybe she did see...

Brilliant story again Mrs Flows🦛!
Also, I quite enjoyed those fourth wall intrusions you did with the story. Threw me off a little but, was still fun to read.

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