RE: RE: The Long Subway Ride (Ink Well Prompt #87)
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RE: The Long Subway Ride (Ink Well Prompt #87)

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Had he gone his whole day without noticing his boxers were inside-out?

Lol, you'd be surprised how often this happens to some guys XD

But damn... This was a pretty freaking awesome story! There's so much tension, so much clever imagery used, and so much symbolism present in the story. Who could've imagined a simple plot involving a slightly drunk lady, desperately trying to get back home early enough for work the next day, despite the little obstacles she faces, would end up in a very satisfying and rather thought provoking finale!

as I progressed further in the wrong direction.

Brilliant closing lines, perfectly sums up the character's arc!

And lol, that train scene was hella 😆. Tbh, you should've been No.1 darling!