RE: RE: That Thirsty Soul
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RE: That Thirsty Soul

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rayt2@rayt2, I'd say you could've ended it with "Her body was lying on the bank of the river." Just without the "mutilation" thing.

Would fit better that way than what you just did in my opinion.

@yaziris: @rayt2, I'd say | Ecency