RE: RE: Stargate
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RE: Stargate

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Beautiful and magical story there mor.salkim@mor.salkim !

I'd say well written in every aspect. Bravo 👏

However, the formatting is something you have overlooked.
It's really hard and painful to read when it's all in a one block of text.

Just something you should consider, otherwise, it was a very interesting read. Thank you for sharing it!